Secret Entry 11 - Serious reflection

However, we gotten some advice saying that we do not have a clear narrative at all. We were trying to say so many things at once and we never really further developed any ideas. We were advised to choose one aspect of our thought process but we chose to rethink. Since we were too focused on using thread we actually forgor about anything related to secrets. Its outcome, its traits, the feeling it gives off etc. We were too self-indulgent. It was in our best interest to rethink what we could use.